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Tue Apr 10, 2012 10:22 pm
live1out2loud7 says...



Hey guys and girls,
I've noticed that not a lot of people have been reviewing poetry lately. So, here is my solution if you want your poem reviewed:

1) Review a poem that the link to has been posted on this thread. You don't have to do this, but I am begging you to!! (I will still review your poem even if you don't though)
2) Post a link to one of your poems that you want reviewed. If it is really long it might just take me a little while, so please be patient.
3) I don't really care what you do after that, go eat a marshmallow, and think of how thankful you are for me giving you the amazing idea!

Please post your poems here! And leave some virtual cheese for me! :D
<3 live1out2loud7
Last edited by live1out2loud7 on Mon Apr 30, 2012 10:39 am, edited 1 time in total.
Hard work often pays off after time, but laziness always pays off now. So does avoiding homework and creeping around YWS!

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Sat Apr 14, 2012 5:29 pm
Gg127 says...



Haha You are so funny! I will definitely post mine once I write it! Hmmm...
  





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Sat Apr 28, 2012 2:30 am
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IwillNOTbow2741 says...



ok since it's really hard to find people to do poetry i'll ask you.
work.php?id=94937
EPLIP
  





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Sat Apr 28, 2012 4:13 am
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FallenAngel97 says...



Hi, Fallen here, I was wondering if you could review this poem for me?
work.php?id=94949
thanks! :D
My heart grows cold
My spirit grows weak
I'm losing my faith
I'm losing my grip...
  





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Sat Apr 28, 2012 4:36 pm
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guineapiggirl says...



Can you review my narrative poem for younger readers?
Danka schern.
work.php?id=94741

P.S. I can't figure out the linky business, can you copy and past it into the top bar, deleting all the grey apart from the / please?
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Sun Apr 29, 2012 6:18 pm
guineapiggirl says...



work.php?id=94741

Worked out the link!
  





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Sun Apr 29, 2012 8:56 pm
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live1out2loud7 says...



I reviewed your work already, but I'm glad you got the link worked out!
Hard work often pays off after time, but laziness always pays off now. So does avoiding homework and creeping around YWS!

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Thu May 17, 2012 10:23 am
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GrymmRipper says...



work.php?id=93702

If you could review this poem of mine it would be really helpful!
Thank you so much! :D
Sanity is nonexistent. =_=''

Need reviews for this poem : work.php?id=93702
Thank you so much!
  





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Tue May 22, 2012 2:42 am
live1out2loud7 says...



To Kathyloop and GrymmRipper, I promise that I will get to your poems, I am just swamped with school work and family visiting at the moment. I will most likely have gotten to it by this weekend. I'm so sorry, but I promise I will review them!
Hard work often pays off after time, but laziness always pays off now. So does avoiding homework and creeping around YWS!

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viewtopic.php?f=188&t=96651
  





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Thu Jun 14, 2012 11:13 pm
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LadyFreeWill says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=95922
Hey, so I know this is a late request, but... please?
*offers a wheel of virtual cheese*
Formerly TheScratchMan.
  





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Sun Jun 17, 2012 12:32 am
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live1out2loud7 says...



Hey! Just wanted to let everyone know that I've finished all the review requests.Anyone else who wants poems reviewed, don't hesitate to ask :D
Hard work often pays off after time, but laziness always pays off now. So does avoiding homework and creeping around YWS!

Want a poem reviewed?
viewtopic.php?f=188&t=96651
  








Poems were like people. Some people you got right off the bat. Some people you just don't get - and never would get.
— Benjamin Alire Saenz, Aristotle and Dante Discover the Secrets of the Universe