Hey I was hoping you could review my work! It's the first thing I've written on here and I wondered if it is actually any good! This would be so helpful
I have only begun here, and already I find myself in an active community. This is great. That's somewhat of a tangent, but just know I'm excited. And I'd love for you to read a short poem I wrote - it's a little... er, dense is a good word for it. But I think relatively good. Let me know!
Deanie, dominating the world since it was cool @Pompadour, 2014 Your username reminds me of a hotdog @Stegosaurus, 2015 Tried to make puns out of your username, but every attempt has been Deanied @Candywizard, 2015
Hey, if you don't mind, would you please review this for me? The Cabin Boy Chapter One I have been working on it for awhile and be as honest as you can. Thanks!
“In a Wonderland they lie, Dreaming as the days go by, Dreaming as the summers die: Ever drifting down the stream- Lingering in the golden gleam- Life, what is it but a dream?” ― Lewis Carroll, Through the Looking Glass
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