Hey I was just wondering if you could review my novel-A Criminal's Heart. I have posted seven chapters plus a prologue. Tun it down if you don't wanna. The link to the novel is in my signature.
~Shubhi
"Next time you point a finger I might have to bend it back Or break it, break it off Next time you point a finger I'll point you to the mirror"
Would you mind looking at my poem, Photograph to Sand? There's a rather long spoiler I'm afraid, which is necessary to help one understand the poem, so please read that first if you don't mind.
Also, I don't mind you being honest, but please don't be too harsh. I can usually take it, but...Well, the spoiler'll explain everything.
Thanks so much, Vampyre.
By the way, the link is in my signature
That night she drew her swan breath in a bed Made soft with all her razor blades, That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked. As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades
Hey there! So, I just posted a short story that needs reviews, and people to help me make it better! Please help me!!! It's a bit rough, so please be as harsh/nit-picky as you like! Thanks in advance!!
That night she drew her swan breath in a bed Made soft with all her razor blades, That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked. As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades
I lingered round them, under that benign sky: watched the moths fluttering among the heath and harebells, listened to the soft wind breathing through the grass, and wondered how any one could ever imagine unquiet slumbers for the sleepers in that quiet earth. — Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights
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