Hiya, Pink, Coco here! Remember me?
I've been kinda awol lately what with school and stuff, but I'm back in YWS world now. I've used the spare time that I now have in abundance to go back and completely revamp my whole story [well, when I say story I mean the 10 chapters that I already posted]. I'd be super dooper greatful if you could check out the changes I've made and give me your honest opinion on them. Take as long as you need though, no rush
Of Loss and Love: chapter 1 http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53716.html
Thanks a bunch!
*coco
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