Go nuts. And it would probably help to listen to the song at the bottom before critiquing, and see if the piece fits with the song. (This is for Jabs' Christmas song contest)
Please and thank you!
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo
Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.
Hey, Kitty! I was wondering if you could take a look at this? And if you have anything, send me the link to one of your pieces! I'd love to take a look at it!
Somebody recommended you as a good reviewer and from all the requests you are getting it looks like it's true lol
I would like it if you could review these. I only says these because they are two halves of chapter 1. I need more reviews on the second half though It's Fantasy.
A childish girl who lives in a childish illusion that the world is loving and death doesn't exist. However, when she moves in with her stepmother everything will change. Simply meaning that a man comes along and bursts her bubble. Come and read the horrifying and disturbing horror/comedy about a girl and her neighbor, a homicidal mass murdering maniac!
I'm looking for a great review and would love it if you could bump me up to the top of your list for me because I need to turn it in tomorrow as an essay for school, and it's not been edited yet.
So here's A Perfect Circle, and if you can't get to it before tomorrow, that's okay. I understand that reviewing takes time ^^
Owning our story can be hard but not nearly as difficult as spending our lives running from it. Embracing our vulnerabilities is risky but not nearly as dangerous as giving up on love and belonging and joy—the experiences that make us the most vulnerable. Only when we are brave enough to explore the darkness will we discover the infinite power of our light. — Brené Brown
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