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Sun Jul 13, 2014 3:28 am
nickstark195 says...



[color=#80FF40]Hey, please fill free to check this out. I would be thrilled to have a review on it! :smt003

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Waka waka & thank you,
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Sun Jul 13, 2014 12:02 pm
Scottylaa says...



Hey Meg. Would you be available to review my edited chapter 1( link: What Could Not Be (Chapter 1) *EDITED*). It would be great if you could just to see if ive made a big improvement from the original.
  





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Mon Jul 14, 2014 9:29 pm
NerdBird says...



I would love it if you could review my revised chapter 1 of my novel!
The Shifties Chapter 1 - Found - REVISED
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Sat Jul 19, 2014 11:23 pm
queerelves says...



Hey~ Are you alright reviewing something 18+?

I have a multi-part short story that I'd like reviewed ^~^ I'd definitely like the second part done, but if you aren't too busy could you also do the first one?

My Place or Yours? [Part 1]
My Place or Yours? [Part 2]
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Sat Jul 19, 2014 11:28 pm
megsug says...



@queerelves
I'm cool with 18+. I'll get to it as soon as I can.
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Sat Jul 19, 2014 11:33 pm
queerelves says...



Awesome~ Thank you!
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Sat Jul 19, 2014 11:49 pm
windrattlestheblinds says...



If you have the time, would you mind taking a look at Monachopsis?
  





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Wed Jul 23, 2014 12:39 am
megsug says...



@nickstark195 is finished~
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Sun Jul 27, 2014 3:39 am
megsug says...



@Scottylaa is done~
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Sun Jul 27, 2014 4:16 am
megsug says...



@NerdBird done
I'm still in love with The Shifties. If you're looking for a baby novel that's just started, I would suggest this one.
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Sun Jul 27, 2014 5:22 am
megsug says...



@queerelves done.
I highly suggest this if you're looking for a read that focuses on characters. (the 18+ rating is warranted though, just saying)
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Sun Jul 27, 2014 3:34 pm
megsug says...



@windrattlestheblinds is done~
It's a great read if you're looking for a Wonderland story. I highly recommend it.
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Wed Jul 30, 2014 5:57 pm
lakegirls says...



Hey! Would you be able to review this? I need to send it into a prof for my portfolio.

The Good Life - Prologue: This is Not a Game of Russian Roulette

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-Nicole
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Mon Aug 04, 2014 1:37 pm
megsug says...



@lakegirls finished~
Who's next? :3
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