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Erm...this is kinda a sidetracking from a bigger story I'm writing...just wrote it last night so if you have any editing suggestions I'd very much appreciate them. Solomon Whiteheart hated ...
marzipan - Jan 7, 2005 - 7 min read
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I light a cigarette. I'm standing on my balcony in my rainbow-striped strappy top, light, turquoise cotton shorts and huge fluffy purple Grosby slippers. It's almost seven on a Friday ...
Liz - Jan 6, 2005 - 6 min read
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I sort of modeled this on the style of Freak the Mighty, if you've ever read that...I think it's pretty cool, need some crit, though. I am a complete L-O-S-E-R. ...
Sam - Jan 5, 2005 - 3 min read
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Sam - Jan 4, 2005 - 1 min read
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Still in progress, and I'm probably going to rewrite this anyway. Still, I've got 10,000 words that need critiquing. So I'll start with this. It's about 3,500 long. --- Hesitation ...
Morran - Jan 4, 2005 - 18 min read
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The wind blew across the barren plains. There was nothing growing on them but several strains of grass. There was a single road across it. Dark clouds drowsed across the ...
StormLord - Jan 4, 2005 - 4 min read
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I woke up with a start and looked around. Shaking my head, I laughed at how paranoid I was getting. I rolled back over and closed my eyes. As I ...
nickelpickle - Jan 2, 2005 - 2 min read
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I’ve always imagined I’d be rich. Even at an exceptionally young age I was consumed with money. My friends bought the toys they desired without a second thought, whilst I ...
Willow - Jan 2, 2005 - 15 min read
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Okay, I know it's long and stops in the middle of nowhere, but I just want to know how it is so far. I'm not really sure about this, so ...
Willow - Jan 1, 2005 - 36 min read
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To say it changed my life would be an understatement. To say I was affected would be an under exaggeration. To say I have learnt from what has happened would ...
Articulate - Dec 31, 2004 - 20 min read
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Not even half a story. But I couldn't seem to find a board for random spewings of the keyboard, so I guess here seems most appropriate. Criticism would be appreciated: ...
Griffinwings - Dec 30, 2004 - 8 min read
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Here's a random scene I'll be writing on the spot, hope you enjoy it. COMMENTS/CORRECTIONS ENCOURAGED Yurok the Waywatcher pulled his cloak low over his face and gazed out from ...
Ego - Dec 29, 2004 - 3 min read
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13 + for language, violence, and sesuality much later in the story Well, this would be my first story thread...but I can't get to my story right now. Here's a ...
Ego - Dec 27, 2004 - 1 min read
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The phone rang, and she rolled out of bed in order to glance at the caller ID. It was him, and within seconds, she was wide awake and ecstatic. Her ...
LiNdSeYo7 - Dec 26, 2004 - 6 min read
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This is the result of me writing when I'm tired, when I've had a lot of beer, when I'm pissed off at my friends, when I feeling pretty lonely, and ...
Firestarter - Dec 21, 2004 - 1 min read