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This piece perfectly captures the essence of those in-between moments we all experience in life. The author beautifully describes those mundane, seemingly insignificant moments that often go unnoticed or unappreciated. The imagery used, such as the condensation on a glass of water or cluttered drawers, effectively conveys the feeling of stagnation and meaninglessness that can sometimes arise in our day-to-day lives.

The contrast between the highs and lows of life and these ordinary moments is striking and thought-provoking. It serves as a reminder that not every moment has to be a grand adventure or profound revelation. Sometimes, it's the little things that truly matter.

Overall, this piece is a poignant reflection on the beauty and importance of those seemingly insignificant moments that make up the fabric of our lives. It's a reminder to find value and meaning in the ordinary, and to appreciate the small things that often go unnoticed. Highly recommended for anyone looking to find beauty in the everyday.

Hello, how are you hon?

Woah, I feel you. And don't ever say that 'it's just the little things' because it's obviously not. I completely understand where you are coming from and if you need a chat I am here. You explained everything so well. Life would feel very boring sometimes but that's okay. Without sadness, happiness, dullness, dryness, and all that stuff, life wouldn't be the same. You wouldn't have experiences to learn from. You wouldn't be the same person as you are today. So believe that it can change and all these moments are going to be happier and better times to remember.
Keep up the good work.
Demi <3

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),

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There's these moments in between the highs and the lows where it feels ordinary. Meaningless moments in time where they freeze and everything seems like a waste of time. A waste of space. Similar to the small things in life no one notices, or cares for. Things like sitting in your car right before going to work, a cloudy sky, listening to the same music a million times, the condensation on a glass of water, a dirty window, dead grass in the winter, a conversation that has been drowned out, cluttered drawers, and everything in between.

I try to tell myself its the little things; but not like this.

Hello there! I'm Orabella, here with a quick review. ^^

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This journal entry is super poetic. I love the imagery of the "meaningless moments in time." I can picture those simple moments exactly the way they are, and using them you perfectly portray the feeling I think you were going for. It's a very relatable feeling, too, those mundane little things in everyday life. But it's not just the feeling that's relatable; you portray it beautifully through your words, and it certainly is not the idea that brings the piece to light. It's the meaning and the craftsmanship, the feelings and the person behind them.

I try to tell myself its the little things; but not like this.