aint no way
i luvvv writings like this. when they fool about things. but i love how the message is that you shouldn't fool innocent people online yet you fooled us with you story hehe. jk jk. overall, it is a clever idea for a simple short sentence. this type of writings and pranks seem very famous on this site. you could be starting a trend! now you are flooded with likes, comments and reviews. good job ig. see you around @Harry1234 c:
Oooh, you got me with this one.... :/ Well, it was a clever idea, I'll give it that. Not much to review, though. LOL 
But I have to say, look at all the comments you've gotten. Don't stop writing the unexpected.
You know this is the perfect example of clickbait when it starts trending in the literary spotlight (again!) six years after it was posted. 
And Trolling Award and most people Trolled in one day Award goes to you Harry1234 Congratulations please go to www.YWsAwards.com.lol
Sorry for you wasting all that points! Also, there is another one like this, so I am confused about that! Maybe next time you should write something great. This was a little amusing, vut I think not really worth it...
Sorry for you wasting all that points! Also, there is another one like this, so I am confused about that! Maybe next time you should write something great. This was a little amusing, vut I think not really worth it...
Really????
You had nothing better to write.
Hopefully you'll be able to find some inspiration.
This could have been a great if you add more.
But anyway I hope you find something to write about
Maybe you could add on to this poem.
Welcome to YWS.
I liked this. I did.
Only problem is, is that I actually was hoping this was going to help me fool someone on something.
But oh wells. I still liked it in the end!! ^-^
~Neverland
P.S Welcome to YWS. But late but still. Better late then never, right?
Hello Harry1234!
Maybe you could put it in the other section... Because as said below it's not really poetry. But it's hilarious. And it's featured. And there are other ways to trick innocent people online, maybe you could make a spoiler under it and in it say "and this". I think that would be really cool, and if people disagree with me, at least it's funny. I was expecting something like how people scam you, but this was sooooooooooo much better.
~Kelpies.
P.S. Welcome to Young Writers Society!
This isn't poetry, and while funny, still not poetry.
>> It'd be better in the other category honestly.
"I'm innocent I tell you! Nog, get me a lawyer."
"Uh, okay. I'll contact cousin Gala; I'm sure he knows one."
This is what ran through my head when I saw this.
Hey Harry1234. This is a small review because I have to get something off my chest about being "fooled". I posted a comment below saying "what is the joke?" and I was told:
Um, you were fooled because you thought this was an actual poem. But it's not, it's just a sentence saying that you were fooled.
Actually, I think the real way of fooling people on YWS is to have a piece on spotlight that is an actual work, and not something written just for Spotlight purposes.
But yes, very clever. xD
Haha! Great joke. But honestly? This isn't entirely correct. Title, should be "How To Fool People Online" and you should add a more interesting line instead of "Like this." I mean, this is poetry, let's keep it true to it's name! (Flow, structure, and elegance.) This was clever, but it could use some work.
Hope to read something with more meat from you But also, well written.
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... I... I was innocent... How could you? To think... to think that such directionless malice, that such pure and unmitigated evil plagues this earth, plagues this beautiful internet... I ask again, how could you? Are you proud? Are you pleased at your trickery? Is your black, pitiless heart content at having fooled so many? HAVE YOU A HEART? DOES YOUR BLACK, VILLAINS BLOOD RUN COLD THROUGH YOUR ICY VEINS OF ITS OWN ACCORD, OR DOES SOME WICKED GOD OF THE SHADOWS PUSH IT THROUGH YOU, DRIVING YOU TO COMMIT EVIL ACTS SUCH AS THIS ONE? ALL OF THE INNOCENT PEOPLE THAT SUFFERED... DO YOU KNOW WHAT YOU'VE DONE?? ARE YOU AWARE OF THE DISGUSTING ACT THAT YOU HAVE JUST COMITED? HOW DARE YOU?!?!?
Nah, I'm kidding. This was clever.
This is kind of funny, but I'm sorry--this shouldn't be on Literary Spotlight... Also, the title's incorrect. It should be: "How do you Fool Innocent People Online?" or "How to Fool Innocent People Online"
Next time, could you include a note that says "Do not like this"? Thank you... I know some other people have great works that could be included here.
Very funny, though.
-IronSpark
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