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Please Review My New Poem & Inform Me For Any Grammar Errors



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Wed Feb 20, 2013 12:47 am
wheretwoworldstouch says...



Hey, I'm Cole. c:
I am trying to learn Old Grammar and Early Modern Grammar. I've been practicing a little and wrote a poem. I was hoping one of you lovely human beings could review it and check for grammar errors; since I'm new to this style and all. I'd honestly, really appreciate it.
Thank you. c:

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-Coley








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