Young Writers Society

Jabbs, Jabbs, jabbs!

Good to hear from you again!


If you could review this:

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I would be more than pleased.

You rock, Jabber!

Uhmm.. it still has yet to be edited:(
Sorry.

It's kind of a low rate piece for me.

TThanksss Again


TP!!

Jab

Chapter 1 of "Listen to the Wind" topic29760.html

Please and Thank You!

If you could do this, Jab, you'd have my eternal gratitude. ^_^

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It's part 3, so it may not make any sense to you, but I'm fairly happy with the story in general. I'm mainly looking for one of your grammar crits, and maybe a little character?

Please and Thank you.

I fear I am always asking you...


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Please and Thank You?



OverEasy

I wish a crit on the revised Killing for Colour, pleasing?

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*Heart and muchas love* Le Penguin.

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This is the third chapter (there are two chapters and a prologue before - I don't expect you to critique those, but you can skim them if you'd like, none of them are long). In fact, I don't even expect you to critique this, if you've still got a long line.

Isa neeeedy. :p

I was wondering if I could perhaps have you glimpse this: It's called "What A Disguise Love Is" topic31101.html


*Hearts* Le Penguin.

*hugs* You're as nice as heaven!

The Séance

Thankee very much!

-Jared

Hey- here's a poem, only if you fancy it, though!

Love and food in advance:

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xxx

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Thanks in advance, if you have time!

Hullo J. ^_^

God Still Loves You (1), er, and the subsequent parts. haha. There will be/are five parts in total, so yes, I am kind of asking for five reviews but... I love you?

I want as many comments as possible before I rewrite it, so I know what to hit. I'm mostly looking for plot/character/meaning comments. I want you to rip it to pieces if it all possible. I can admit I have weak spots - that's why I'm going to rewrite it again. But I want to know all the weak spots, and everyones opinions, because I bring in my own knife. And I love you.

JABBAH!!

Hola! I have an entry up for JFW's contest, and she extended the deadline, leaving me more time to spruce of the entry so I can win! *laughs maniacally* Anyway, the story ends with vampire-y stuff, so that's cliche beyond belief. I know there are 20 billion stories out there concerning vampires, so if you could skip over that (because I've already realized it), that would be utterly fabulous.

And, you know, if you could do a line-by-line, I have cookies and points if you want them. Pretty please? Pretty, pretty please with - oh my goodness. I have to get outside. It's such a nice day! Stupid sun comes out two hours after I get home.

Anywho, here's the link!

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Thanks a bunch!

Because I love your reviews


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Please and Thank you!


(ps I miss talking to you since the chat shut down, if you want PM me )

Now that band and NaNo are over, I am starting to revive my critiques. Feel free to ask for some and help me get back in shape, if anything. Final exams are coming up, but I'm one of those people who can't study for hours on end. I'll need a break doing something I love, so no worries.

So, as my first post says...

Hit me with your best shot!

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Awwwh, Jabbs, you're so nice! I love you.


-Jared