Young Writers Society

'Course, Jared. ^_^

Raimunda-- Er, have you got anything you'd like critiqued specifically?










IMP

Hello! I'd love some help on Suicide Kills Us All. Mind taking a look?

Thanks!

~JFW1415

Hola! If you could rip this to shreds, please do so. And don't comment on the vampire ending and how cliche it is - I've come to that realization as soon as the words flew from my fingers.

Alliteration!

I have my English Final on Wednesday. FUN. Anyway, it's an entry for the contest JFW is holding, and she extended it... so I have more time. Whoo - hoo! So, will you critique? I have cookies.

Ickle link-ikins:

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Er, mostly back. See edited first message.









IMP

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-ALICE