Young Writers Society

I think we all can post, except, at least with me, I don't really know where to go with it. Wolf joining kind of confused me, no offense, so now I have no idea what's going on!
No offense to anyone.

(Hey guys! So I am super busy, so I need to dropped this storybook. I was hoping somebody could kill off my character. I'll continue to post until he's gone, but feel free to kill Kyler off. Thanks!)

Dibs on killing a character off!
No offence Vuzzy, it just really rare for me, so I grab the chance.

The wizard and the door begin to fade... turns out the whole thing was an illusion to begin with! A mysterious voice booms, "You fools think that you've beaten us?" *Cackles* As the army closes in Rosalie is caught off guard as an arrow pierces into her armour. The taunting of Orcs and Demons grew ever louder; swords raised, bows and quivers aimed towards the party... There were only two options: Run or face the army head on.

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Sorry everyone.
It won't happen again

Alright lets start fresh! (the past is in the past- where it should be.)

Wolf- I'm not sure what's happening with your wizard right now (I'm a Dyslexic so I get mixed up easily, sorry!)
Would you be offended if we jumped back a bit to just before he enters? It would help me a great deal in making Itaeo reactions more real to who he is, and might give the others a good place to jump back in!

I could write the "just before post" to pull up some loose ends- if that would help and it's alright with everyone. Is it?

we've stalled, so backtracking a bit (I think) would be a big help for everyone involved!
We can still have the goblins/urks attack- but if we have a little breath before, that would be a good time for character development!

Thanks everyone!

~Shadow~

That is a very good idea! Oh and, I can't remember(sorry, I'm an airhead! ), do we have a DT? That would help so then we all know each others plans and won't be stepping on toes. If we do, perfect, and sorry for being slow!

We have DT now.

I hope you don't mind hat I started one Slyver, things were getting scrambled with so many "out of character" posts going on here.

So lets move all OOC posts to the DT from now on?

If it will make the story easier to carry on I'm fine with you doing that.

Summery of the last few posts: Our group was trying to decide how to get the relics from Ryhder's mother who is the Queen. As it was terrible late and tempers were flaring it was decided they would sleep before making plans. While everyone was getting ready for sleep Itaeo started following Aritha who was asking strangely, he sensed something wrong with her. He followed her in his ghost form until she fell asleep. Then he tried to “read” her soul and came face to face with her inner Voice, a dark entity of sorts who takes possession of Aritha's body. The Voice attacked him and they fought, Itaeo was injured in his shoulder and Kylar was thrown backwards into a tree. Aritha was able to regain control over the voice and was horrified for what happened. A plan was then thought up- Aritha could purposely get caught by the Queens guard trespassing and then let the Voice loose in the castle to get the relics. There were strong objections to this plan, Then Itaeo offered/was volunteered by Kylar. Because of Itaeos ghost form and the fact that the Voice couldn't kill him he seemed the best choice but Aritha had her objections to this. (This below was Ice's last post so lets start from there please!)

Aritha:
“ “What's the worse they could do to me?” Itaeo said, I looked at him. "They could hurt you immensely trying to kill you, or they could lock you up and you could just leave. But I'm not gonna let you take that chance for me. Not after what I did to you. I am going to help you with this whether you like it or not." He looked at me, kind of stricken with my sudden want to help, and then smiled, but just a little and only for a moment.”

Itaeo:

She was a tough one, I'll give her that. She didn't object to being used by our group, just so long as she was the only one put in danger. Rosalie wrung her hands in aggravation.

“Alright will you let Itaeo go with you at least? What if the Voice doesn't come out and your stuck? You'll need someone to help you!”

Hector who had been lounging against a tree cleared his throat.

“I am a dragon, don't forget that.” he stopped smiling, he was such a pain in the a**. Alekan rolled his golden eyes and tapped a claw.

“Yes lizard we are aware you are a dragon, make your point.” Hector glared daggers but shrugged.

“I could just attack the castle myself and kill everyone. It's a win win, you get the relics and I get a free meal.” He actually seemed please with his idea.

Rosalie looked ill again and I groaned at the thought of all those souls I'd need to reap. That might kill me.

That was when Rhyder cut in, breaking his silence.

“Have you all forgotten she's my mother? I may not like her but she's still my mother- I don't want her dead.”

“So that is why if I go I could just sneak in.” I said again, Aritha gave me a look. “Excuse me, if we sneak in. I could keep her from killing everyone and she is much better at sneaking and finding hidden things than I am.”

There was a pause and in those few moments I sensed something, actually we all did. It was magic of some sort, erratically pulsing. It wasn't Fae, or dragon, or anything I had ever sensed before.

“ A wizard?” Alekan murmured looking around wide eyed.


(So I was thinking Wizards are rare, and Itaeo's never met one (they don't have them in the east) It might be a good Idea to throw some ideas around on the DT before going on, but Wolf did say he wanted the next post so he can enter Thomas. Then our characters will have a very short time to talk before being attacked by the urks/goblins. Vuzzy will not be able to post until tonight so we must keep Kylar in the loop but not manipulate him ourselves- okay my friends? Also I'm going to say it again, I have Dyslexia, so please forgive any spelling or punctuation errors you find. I do try my best to proofread everything before I submit but I know I make mistakes. )