just in case you needed them so you will understand the story.
"No life is forever. We found and fought here. We loved and died here... The crops whither and the bones of hunger walk the sunken roads... The land has failed us... In dance and song we gift and mourn our children. They carry us over the ocean in dance and song. -American Wake by Riverdance
Hi! My short story is posted in three parts, but altogether its not hugely long (4,000 words). I would love, love, love it if you could read all three, but if you only read one or two that would be okay too. I am most worried about the middle, because I haven't gotten any feedback on that yet. Thank you so much! work.php?id=96979
I would appreciate if you'd review this. I'm not quite sure what should be fixed but I'm not completely satisfied with how it feels while reading it. Any criticism and advice will help!
Could you please review my poem. Its under Poetry-Romantic. The name is Love.
~The future is only history yet to come~ personal quote ~Writing isn't a job or work. Its a passion and a gift.~ Personal quote ~Love is something everyone deserves, few know, and only the elite understand~ personal quote
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