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Fri Feb 17, 2012 11:26 pm
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DragonGirl11 says...



Hey howdy hey! DragonGirl11 here offering reviews!

I review very specifically, so expect lots of quotes. I tend to focus a lot on grammar and spelling, but of course I comment on plot, characters, etc. I will not be held responsible to review on a first-come-first-serve basis. I'll review in order of intrest, but I WILL review everything requested, if it fits my guidelines.

Types of works:
  • Short stories is what I'm good at.
  • Articles and chapters are ok, I guess.
  • I'm not very good at critiquing poetry. I might try, but I'm really not the dragon for the job.
Genres:
  • My absolute favourite thing to read (and review) is sci fi and fantasy. Bonus points if there are dragons.
  • Romance is ok, but not eewy-gooey Twilight type stuff. As in, please have characters with some meat on them. Nothing with adult content, either.
  • Fan fiction is cool if I know what it's based on, so ask first.
  • I'd prefer stuff with low-ish levels of violence.
  • All other genres are fair game.


Let the requests pour in!
Last edited by DragonGirl11 on Sun Jun 17, 2012 11:19 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Mon Feb 20, 2012 10:15 am
AlfredSymon says...



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Yes, I know it's a poem, DG, but I know YOU'LL BE GREAT at critiquing it! Please do, dear. I'm on the way of finishing your piece. I like it, and so I plan to review it, soon... ;)

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Tue Feb 21, 2012 8:58 pm
DragonGirl11 says...



Done!
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Wed Feb 22, 2012 5:27 am
callmeike says...



Hello DragonGirl :). I have something interesting that i think that you would enjoy reading. Right now there are only two parts but im working on the third right now. You could just review one if you'd like :P. It does have some fantasy in it.
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Mon Feb 27, 2012 12:40 am
DragonGirl11 says...



Done! Both of them :) I can't wait to read the third one!
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Sat Mar 10, 2012 12:29 am
DragonGirl11 says...



Anybody want a review?
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Mon Apr 09, 2012 4:11 pm
DragonGirl11 says...



Hello? Anyone? #poorlyveiled #bump
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Tue Apr 17, 2012 7:38 am
DudeMcGuy says...



Hey DragonGirl11! This topic is still open right?

Edit: Would you look at this one for me:

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work.php?id=95346

Thanks in advance!
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Tue Apr 17, 2012 9:06 pm
dreamingthelife says...



Hey! i just wanted to know if you could review my post? its sort of a hunger games fanfic, but in a non character releated way. Its a short story so you should like reviewing it :) would appreciate it thanks! work.php?id=94744




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Fri Apr 20, 2012 2:46 am
ShadowVyper says...



Hey, this is just a really short story that I wrote about nature. Thanks,
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Fri Apr 20, 2012 4:43 am
Ikerot says...



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Would you like to read a scifi/fantasy novel? :D
Doesn't have dragons though, shucks :L
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Sat May 05, 2012 10:21 pm
TheAceofAll says...



Hi, I just joined this site and was hoping for a review of a few captures of a fantasy book i started. It's called Welcome to Orba Nova. FYI, dragons are not in these chaptures but they play a big role later so if you like this, read my next post. My friends who have read it like it but i doubt they will give me a true opinion to spare my feelings. If you don't mind, could you give me a review. Oh, i know my first chapter is a little dry but it picks up fast.
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Sun May 06, 2012 7:49 pm
DragonGirl11 says...



DreamingTheLife - done.
ShadowVyper - I did a review but my session timed out, and it was all like "Save as guest?" or something, so I tried to submit it but it didn't work. until I get back to you- it was good :D

As for the rest of you, sorry it's taking so long, but I've been busy. I'll get around to you soon, hopefully.
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Tue May 08, 2012 7:48 pm
Calla says...



Hey, would you review these fews chapters that my friend omniyus wrote. It's fanfiction based off the Hunger Games he had to write in class.
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Tue May 08, 2012 7:50 pm
DragonGirl11 says...



I've got a few pretty long things to review, as you can tell, and I'm still rather busy. Post a link, and I'll review it sooner or later.
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