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Mon Feb 06, 2012 9:45 pm
TheClosetKidnapper says...



I pretty much will review anything but:

- Nonfiction
- Photos/Art (I love them but wouldn't know how to help you improve)
- Script

And I have more experience in poetry and short stories, though I will read through novels if you would be so kind as to leave a link for the section you'd like to be reviewed and whatever comes before it so that I'm not that lost.

Request away!
Last edited by TheClosetKidnapper on Sat May 26, 2012 3:37 pm, edited 2 times in total.
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

Semiautomatic
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Mon Feb 06, 2012 9:49 pm
stargazer9927 says...



I hope you're not serious. You probably don't even live near the same place, but I would buy you a candy bar or something if I could :)

Could you review this for me? It's a song, but it's more of a REALLY long poem.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93184
Thanks in advanced.
Let's eat mom.
Let's eat, mom.
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Mon Feb 06, 2012 10:59 pm
TheClosetKidnapper says...



Done! :D
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

Semiautomatic
twenty one pilots




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Tue Feb 07, 2012 1:18 am
stargazer9927 says...



Thank you so much :) I still wish I could give you that candy bar ;)
Let's eat mom.
Let's eat, mom.
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Thu Feb 09, 2012 1:49 am
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TheClosetKidnapper says...



No problem :)

Next
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

Semiautomatic
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Sun Feb 26, 2012 8:27 pm
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VampireSenshi says...



If you're not too busy!!!

My new work, may need some tweeks but is seriously in need of some constructive criticism...


Thanx :D

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93649
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Sun Feb 26, 2012 9:15 pm
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TheClosetKidnapper says...



Done! :D Great job on that by the way!

Next!
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

Semiautomatic
twenty one pilots




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Thu Mar 08, 2012 8:07 pm
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Podge says...



BOOM! Sorry, it's quite long, I hope you can handle this one.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93883
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Thu Mar 08, 2012 8:52 pm
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TheClosetKidnapper says...



Done! And it wasn't too long for me. ;) Great job!

Next!
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

Semiautomatic
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Thu May 24, 2012 2:24 pm
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TheClosetKidnapper says...



Back open for business! Request away!
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

Semiautomatic
twenty one pilots




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Fri May 25, 2012 1:56 pm
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Candyman says...



work.php?id=95512

Hi I am new here and need reviews on my story. Could you please review it? :)




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Fri May 25, 2012 2:25 pm
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TheClosetKidnapper says...



Done! And welcome to YWS, Candyman! : )
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

Semiautomatic
twenty one pilots




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Fri May 25, 2012 9:57 pm
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psudiname says...



hey could you review the first chapter of my novel for me? thanks,
work.php?id=95420
if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.




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Fri May 25, 2012 10:43 pm
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ShortBus says...



Hi there. I just wrote my 1st poem. Think you can review it and give me some help? It's pretty short so it should only take a minute or two to review. Mind you, I know nothing about poetry but I gave it a try anyway.

work.php?id=95523




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Fri May 25, 2012 11:04 pm
TheClosetKidnapper says...



Done, psudiname!

Working on yours now, ShortBus!
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

Semiautomatic
twenty one pilots