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Tue Jan 24, 2012 12:43 pm
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ZlyWilk says...



Before I was ZlyWilk, I was GoldenQuill.
And before I was a Bad Wolf Editor, I owned a Tropical Reviewing Shack.


Welcome aboard The Bad Wolf Incoperations spaceship! To your right is concessions, your left is the restrooms, and straight ahead will take us to the bridge. Oh, no dear--you might not want to pull that lever. No. No, a 'fire drill' doesn't happen in space, there's no outside to go to. No, straight ahead. Come on.

Oh. You wanted something reviewed, didn't you? What do you have? Well that's good! Because I am willing to review:
Everything


Why don't you hand it to me, and I'll see what I can do about this?
Thank you millions!

~Review Log Since Our Ship Set Sail~
Manga girls (colored pencil and digital drawing) by xXTheBlackSheepXx
The Four People Nina Helped (And the One She Couldn't)- P1 by Jas
Special Place for us by PurpleEurope
The Poets by thetraveler
I Won't Let Go by wonderland
Citizen or Solider by VampireSenshi512
You Know When You've Lived by ShaunaJAY
Farmville by Audy
Lost in Nowhere by silentwords
I've Seen a Little Fairy by yubbies21
The Hobbit's Hole by GeorginaMay
Mentors and Heroes (working on the title) by ItalianIlluminist
Mentors and Heroes (working on the title) Chapter 2 by ItalianIlluminist
Last edited by ZlyWilk on Fri Apr 13, 2012 4:37 am, edited 16 times in total.
formerly GoldenQuill

Donna: You alright?
Doctor: I'm always alright.
Donna: Is 'always alright' secret Time Lord code for really not alright at all?
Doctor: Why?
Donna: Because I'm alright too.

I review everything.




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Tue Jan 24, 2012 9:58 pm
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xXTheBlackSheepXx says...



Hi! Can I request an art review? I posted this a few days ago and still no comments. I'd like to know if there's anything I can work on before I start a new project. Thanks a bunch!
viewtopic.php?f=27&t=92842
And I'd be happy to do a review for you in return, if you need it :)
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The good news is we can't make any mistakes.
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Tue Jan 24, 2012 11:34 pm
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Jas says...



Hi! A review please! :D It's a short story, I'd like a more plot and character based review rather than grammar and spelling and all that. Thanks!

viewtopic.php?f=5&t=92719
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but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~




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Wed Jan 25, 2012 4:05 am
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thetraveler says...



Here's a bit of poetry for you:
[url]viewtopic.php?f=196&t=92939[/url]
Thanks!
Cheers,
thetraveler
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SPOILED!!!




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Wed Jan 25, 2012 4:06 pm
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Audy says...



Nice to meet you Zlywilk.

This is long and a disheartening piece, so I'll return the favor if there's anything you yourself want reviewed.

Thanks :)




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Wed Jan 25, 2012 6:29 pm
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silentwords says...



Hey (:
I was wondering if you could review a poem for me when you get the chance. viewtopic.php?f=8&t=92782
Thanks alot!
I'd like to think I'm creative... instead of just plain weird ;D




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Fri Jan 27, 2012 4:56 am
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Mjdwrite says...



If you ever get a chance, the story in my signature would appreciate a look-over. Grammar and spelling can be repaired later on, so don't waste your precious time over such that can waste another's time. I mostly want to know how to make the scene more dramatic and terrible.
Quick back-story- Lynnea is a princess. She dressed up as a servant and met another servant (he is a prince but she does not know that.) She is being forced to find a boyfriend because of an old law and her parents think that she is lonely. Oh and they are on a tiny island country off of the coast of Denmark.
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Tue Apr 03, 2012 2:39 am
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yubbies21 says...



I wrote this not to long ago and am really excited about it. It's being published later this year but I'd like some feedback on it. You said that you would review everything so I'm asking you to do a review for me.

I’ve seen a little fairy

I’ve seen a little fairy
In between the trees
With small bucket and
Tiny brush she dusts
The trees with
Silver shavings
Creating a soft glow

We all have thought
That when winter comes
It is the frost and snow
That lightly covers the trees
And turns them almost white
But no, we are wrong
It is the work of fairies
The snow glows white on the mountain tonight
Not a footprint to be seen.
A kingdom of isolation, and it looks like I'm the Queen
The wind is howling like this swirling storm inside
Couldn't keep it in; Heaven knows I've tried




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Tue Apr 03, 2012 1:11 pm
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GeorginaMay says...



Hey :)

I'd really like this reviewed by someone reliable like yourself, I wrote it in school and it seemed quite good compared to the others in my class, but it's probably not compared to the talented people on here :')

Here's the link and thankyou for reading!

work.php?id=94421
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Wed Apr 04, 2012 6:21 pm
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Baal says...



Hello, and thanks for reviewing

work.php?id=94463
Formerly LouisCypher





Audii. Veni. Vici.



Ever thought that a song made just for your character would be epic? I can make that dream come true. Maybe, possibly.


Sheep.
Spoiler! :
"ooh, sheep music!"
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Fri Apr 06, 2012 10:43 am
Baal says...



And once again, I beg of you to review this for me-- it's the following chapter
work.php?id=94518
Thanks. Your help has been much appreciated
Formerly LouisCypher





Audii. Veni. Vici.



Ever thought that a song made just for your character would be epic? I can make that dream come true. Maybe, possibly.


Sheep.
Spoiler! :
"ooh, sheep music!"
- Niebla




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Thu Apr 19, 2012 6:37 pm
DudeMcGuy says...



Hello ZlyWilk!

After reading your reviews I must say I'm a big fan. I like how detailed and thorough you are. It looks like you haven't had any review requests for a while so . . . Requesting permission to board the ship!

I have a prologue to my Novel (here: work.php?id=94743 ) that I'm working on. First attempt at writing serious fiction.
Please let me know what you think.
When I was young I used to have problems finishing my sentences, but now I




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Sat Apr 21, 2012 9:59 am
Baal says...



Once again, I come to you to ask for your marvelously detailed reviews.
work.php?id=94837
And, thanks.
Formerly LouisCypher





Audii. Veni. Vici.



Ever thought that a song made just for your character would be epic? I can make that dream come true. Maybe, possibly.


Sheep.
Spoiler! :
"ooh, sheep music!"
- Niebla