If you could review my novel, "Country Boy," I'd really appreciate it! I only have one complete chapter and a chapter in progress so far (although that's five posts because chapter one I did in three parts and chapter two is so far in two parts), but if you could take a look at any or all - I'd especially appreciate reviews on chapter two. I'd prefer in-depth, but a general review is fine as well.
Could you review this short story please? :3 Oh, and I'd like a general review, maybe a-little-in-depth-ish . Thanks!
"The rabbit always squeals in the jaws of the fox, but when has another rabbit ever rushed up to save it?" Damon Salvatore ;'( please, my lump, he just needs HUGS <3 Need a review? Just ask Just keep writing, just keep writing, do-do-do-do-do
I have a piece I think you may enjoy and I'd appreciate a review (however in depth is your choice) It's under scripts but only because it doesn't fit anywhere else as its an all dialogue story but not script format
Sorry it took so long, everyone. November = last minute preparations for finals, driving around doing errands, and meeting up with family members. But all done, and on holiday. So keep me busy. ^_^
Can I please have an in-depth review of this and this? They're both going to be edited to be stand-alone pieces for a contest and I've edited both quite a bit already and want some new feedback.
Thanks!
I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
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