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Thu Sep 22, 2011 8:23 am
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Shinda says...



Ohayou mina! (Hiya everybody!)
Welcome to my reopened WRFF stall =)


What I can offer anybody looking for a review is an honest review, which might as well be harsh. I review pretty much anything except fan-fiction (Because I might lack related knowledge and that would affect the quality). When reviewing I focus more on the impression the story gives than the grammar, however, I do correct grammar and sentence build. So you might know better how I truly review, I'd like you to read at least one of my the most recent reviews.

(Ever since the new web page system, the old links and not usable - I'll add new links upon reviewing)
Unfading Chapter 1 by ScarlettFire
Falling Flame by Angelreader77

I'm pretty much a critic, so if you can't stand honest criticism much, please don't ask - it might disgust you. If you're looking for an honest opinion and want to improve no matter the truth - I'm happy to help.


Best regards,
~Kyousuke
Last edited by Shinda on Sun Feb 12, 2012 12:31 pm, edited 5 times in total.
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Thu Sep 22, 2011 9:41 am
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Twit says...



I definitely need harsh and honest on this. That's a link to the story's page because it's easier to give one link than three and there's three chapters up at the moment, and if you could do all three I'd be supremely grateful, though if you don't have time, just one will be fine. ^_^
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Thu Sep 22, 2011 3:06 pm
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Shinda says...



All 3 done.
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Fri Sep 23, 2011 9:22 pm
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mikepyro says...



I would very much enjoy a review over my animal novel. The work is complete so whatever ch is fine, even just the first. If you'd prefer reviewing a short story instead my story The Charlie or The Yellow Sheets are among my better works I'm most interested in reviews from. Sheets is more storyline and Charlie is more dialogue and prose styled.

I'd be glad to return a favor to a work of your own, though I'm also honest as well




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Fri Sep 30, 2011 9:37 am
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Phoenix23 says...



Hello ShinDa, :). I think its time for some honest criticism. Will you please review my poem? Here is the link:
viewtopic.php?t=88127 .
If you are a dreamer, come in,
If you are a dreamer, a wisher, a liar,
A hope-er, a pray-er, a magic bean buyer...
If you're a pretender, come sit by my fire
For we have some flax-golden tales to spin.
Come in!
Come in!
- Shel Silverstein




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Sat Oct 08, 2011 10:04 am
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Shinda says...



Forgot to mention all's done =)
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Sun Feb 05, 2012 9:51 pm
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Shinda says...



Oi, it's about time this was reopened! =) Up and running, ask for a review if you feel like it!
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Jas says...



work.php?id=93230

That please! :]
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~




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Mon Feb 06, 2012 10:01 am
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Shinda says...



Done! =)
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Tue Feb 07, 2012 12:06 pm
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Angelreader77 says...



Can you review this, please?
work.php?id=93194
Thanks! :)
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Tue Feb 07, 2012 2:04 pm
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Shinda says...



Done!
"I learned that it is the weak who are cruel, and that gentleness is to be expected only from the strong."




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Sun Feb 12, 2012 2:33 pm
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Shinda says...



Looks like this topic is lagging behind to the 2nd page! Renew!
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Fri Feb 24, 2012 3:06 pm
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Emmzziee says...



work.php?id=93336
I'm losing total faith in everything that I, uh, write now and I need some honest tips.
THANK YOU :D
(I'll review something of yours, too, if you like.)
I want to play a game.




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Fri Feb 24, 2012 6:28 pm
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Shinda says...



Done! =)
"I learned that it is the weak who are cruel, and that gentleness is to be expected only from the strong."