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Tue Apr 09, 2013 1:45 pm
rachaelwillson1 says...



Hey :) I was hoping you could review my work! It's the first thing I've written on here and I wondered if it is actually any good! This would be so helpful :)

Here it is:
work.php?id=100823

Thank you :)
  





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Tue Apr 09, 2013 6:22 pm
ArcticMonkey says...



Done, rachael! And welcome to YWS! :D

Anybody else?
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Wed Apr 10, 2013 12:39 pm
chandowd says...



could you do mine? work.php?id=100845
  





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Sun Apr 14, 2013 9:48 am
ArcticMonkey says...



Done!

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Sun Apr 14, 2013 5:52 pm
champ321 says...



I would really appreciate a review from you!

work.php?id=100932
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Sun Apr 14, 2013 9:46 pm
skorlir says...



I have only begun here, and already I find myself in an active community. This is great. That's somewhat of a tangent, but just know I'm excited. And I'd love for you to read a short poem I wrote - it's a little... er, dense is a good word for it. But I think relatively good. Let me know!

work.php?id=100955
  





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Sun Apr 21, 2013 1:35 pm
ArcticMonkey says...



done champ and skorlir! Hope you enjoyed! ^_^

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Sun Jun 23, 2013 7:00 pm
ArcticMonkey says...



EXAMS ARE OVER!

This is reopened once again, [23-06-13]

Please, request away!
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Mon Jun 24, 2013 5:40 pm
Deanie says...



Mad Hatters

Thank you! ^^
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Mon Jun 24, 2013 5:45 pm
StoneHeart says...



Looks like I came to the perfect place for these.

A Short Story: A Last Sight.

A lyrical poem: Honour.

P.s. If you have anything of yours you want reviewed, just tag me.
For I who am poor have only my dreams
I spread my dreams under your feet . . .

. . . tread softly for you tread on my dreams.

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Wed Jun 26, 2013 6:27 pm
ArcticMonkey says...



Done, done, done, and done! (:o oxford comma)

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Sat Jun 29, 2013 9:28 pm
Sins says...



Yoyoyo, Arctic 2 da Monkee

Could you please check out the first chapter of my novel? The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter One)

Thanking you!
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Sun Jun 30, 2013 2:27 pm
ArcticMonkey says...



Done Skins ^^

Who else wants a review? x3
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Sun Jun 30, 2013 8:14 pm
HostofHorus says...



Hey Arctic! Would you mind reviewing my short story for me? :) The Graveyard
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Need a review? Feel free to ask me! :)
  





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Mon Jul 01, 2013 6:30 pm
Jony says...



Hey, if you don't mind, would you please review this for me? The Cabin Boy Chapter One
I have been working on it for awhile and be as honest as you can. Thanks!
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Ever drifting down the stream- Lingering in the golden gleam- Life, what is it but a dream?”
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