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Hey guys, I'm Talulahbelle, but you can call me Belle...or Tali, or even Lou...I get them all.
I'll review anything except for poetry (I'm no good at it).
I write in fantasy and other fiction, so that's my specialty but I'll review anything.
So just ask and I'll get to it!

Back to Square One (2) - the second part of my story, topic54556.html

Back to Square One (1) - the first part of my story, topic54389.html

Hi--I would like a couple more reviews for my 1st story. It's a fanfiction about a video game called Super Smash Bros. Brawl, for the Wii. I hope you don't get confused if you haven't played the game before! Thank you.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic54552.html, thanks again.

Hey! I'll get to your reviews shortly, but I'm at school so it'll be a little late. Sorry its taking so long! And I promise I'll get to it as soon as possible!

My story is... horror...ish?

Here is the first part - Back to Square One (1)

Then, here is part two - Back to Square One (2)

Also, I don't mind nick-picks, if you want to, go ahead. I want your opinion on it and maybe a star if it's good enough?

Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

-ALICE