Young Writers Society

and not so adolescents

Need to review, anything please, just need it. Please!!

Make me review!

I'll review
All Kinds of Poetry
-Dramatic
-Lyric
-Narrative
-Other
Fantasy Fiction
Other Fiction
Science Fiction
Historical Fiction (not much though)
Action Adventure Fiction
Romantic Fiction

I do not review
Non-Fiction
Other
Scripts
Lyrics

What I might review
Art and Photography (I don't have much experience in it, but I can surely give you my opinion and tell you what can be improved)
Advanced Critiques (depends on my time, but I would definitely give it a try.)

So I'm not that into harsh reviews, I don't like them but...that doesn't mean I don't give them, well rearely. I am a grammar, characterization, character development, description, style freak. But I'm not harsh, only when I see a work that has potential and it hasn't been fully developed.

So send me the link and I'll be there as soon as possible. When you receive the review, please send me a PM to let me know, ok?

So are you ready to send me reviews?
On your marks, get set, send!!

Hey Pudin! I would like a review on my story in Romantic Fiction. Here's the link: Love Sucks
Thanks xD
~Mo.

Done. some more? Please!!

Hey there.
I'd be much gratified if you'd review this -
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Thanks!

Hi, would you mind reading my fantasy?
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well hopefully this works:
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Done, some more please!!

Hi! I just posted a prologue for my new story. It's not that long, but it's a very very rough draft. Please be as harsh as you like! Also, I'm not really liking the title that much. If you have any suggestions, feel free to tell me!

Anyways, here's the link: The Real World - Prologue

Thankies in advance!

~ Trish

Done with the last one, give me-give me-more!!

lol. Britney Spears Song.

Some more, please!!!! ***Dies***

Hey! I really need a good review on the first chapter of my book (one that actually tells me how to improve). But in order for that chapter to make sense will you also take a look at the prologue? Thanks! (Oh, and bear with me because I'm not sure how to make a link to it)

Prologue
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=53013

Chapter One
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=53249

If those links didn't work you can probably find them both under my profile under "The Elements: Secrets of the River" folder.

Thank you tons!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53808.html

Its an Other Fiction piece; also, I'd like to have your opinion on a title idea. Please?

A review on this would really help:

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Totally over those, now some more, please I'm starving!!

Please, more reviews!!

More please, I need more!!
Please!

Need more Need More Need More