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Mon Apr 20, 2009 2:39 am
Moriah Leila says...



Okay, well I'm all caught up on reviews. Just remember people, I cannot review anything that is in a usergroup forum. In order for me to comment on anything in a group, I have to be a member of that group. I don't really want to join every group on YWS, so for that reason please keep your reviews in either the Main Forum or blogs. Thanks and keep the reviews coming!
I am not addicted to reading, I can quit as soon as I finish one more chapter.





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Fri Apr 24, 2009 3:08 pm
Master_Yoda says...



Hey Lisa,

This is the next piece of my story, I'd be grateful for a review. ^_^

topic47096.html
#TNT

The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
-- Robert Frost

I review your reviews: viewtopic.php?f=188&t=94522





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Fri Apr 24, 2009 8:31 pm
MagnusBane says...



topic47115.html

I wrote this story with a friend, and we'd really appreciate a review! Please?
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Sat Apr 25, 2009 8:58 pm
Lord Anzius says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic47202.html
sorry to bother you again , but I want you to read this story.

And there was drum roll
chapter 1 part 1.
To copy reality is good... But to create reality is much, much better.
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Sat Apr 25, 2009 9:36 pm
Bickazer says...



Would you please take a look at the beginnings of what I hope will be the first novel I ever finish? It's a fantasy story, and has two parts up so far, but you can just look at the first one if you like.

Please go really in-depth; the more nitpicky, the better!

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Ah, it is an empty movement. That is an empty movement. It is.





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Mon Jul 13, 2009 6:39 pm
TaylaChase says...



Will you please review this?

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Thanks!

~Tayla
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Mon Jul 13, 2009 11:08 pm
Boni_Bee says...



I'd be very happy if you could review this! It's a prologue in Historical Fiction.

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:D





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Tue Jul 14, 2009 12:33 am
TaylaChase says...



Will you please review this?

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Thanks!

~Tayla
A person who never made a mistake never tried anything new.
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I'm not afraid of death, I just don't want to be there when it happens.
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I am the author of my life. Unfortunately I'm writing in pen and I can't erase my mistakes. . .
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Fri Jul 17, 2009 12:10 pm
RainWanderer says...



You quitted your job to review? O-o Sorry, I was just joking...
So if you still have sometime to review my story, here it is:

Mechanical Fairies: Part1
Part2
Part3
Who am I? Just a wanderer, traveling from real life to dreams.

“Writing a book is a very lonely business. You are totally cut off from the rest of the world, submerged in your obsessions and memories.” - Mario Vargas Llosa





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Tue Dec 08, 2009 10:11 pm
Moriah Leila says...



I am back, after a very long absence, and ready to review!! So if you need a critique, post your link below!
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Thu Dec 17, 2009 1:26 am
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Last edited by gryffgotgame on Fri May 05, 2023 12:02 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Fri Dec 18, 2009 2:00 am
Moriah Leila says...



Done and ready for more!
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Fri Dec 18, 2009 4:39 pm
Mars says...



If you can review this, I will send you a million bajillion virtual cookies. :)
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Sun Jan 03, 2010 4:31 am
Moriah Leila says...



I am all caught up with reviews and seriously dying for more. Please people, there are only so many reviews I can do browsing the forums. It is so much easier for me if I know specific works people want me to critique. Trust me, it will be worth it! Please!
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Sun Jan 03, 2010 10:11 am
AquaMarine says...



Here, just because you asked. It's in Other Fiction, and it needs help!

Thanks!

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