Evi! Can you review this? It's for Cat and June's horror contest :
topic46302.html But, it isn't too scary...So, help would be welcome...
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Love is the answer to life yet the slowest form of suicide. Love is a paradox. And that's why we love it.
It's my attempt at minimalism for Kylan's competition. That's why there's almost no description, adverbs, etc. It's closed now, but I still want a little help because I think it's off. So, if you want, brutalise.
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
seeing this tag and going "oh what's this? :)" then getting slapped in the face with shady's good grammar is the worst thing that's ever happened to me — SilverNight
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