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Hi. I was wondering if you would give me your opinion on the prologue of my book, "When the Sky Bleeds". It is an action/paranormal romance, but the prologue sets everything up, so it is a bit longer and more bland than the usual prologue. Hope you don't mind.
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can you review this for me...It's a story for a contest and its deadline is coming soon....
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