Young Writers Society

Hi there, @Shia! We hope you have an equally pleasant day.

Me and my bunny friends would love to! We're a bit busy at the moment, but you can expect a review for at least one of your chapters within the next several days. (Although we do have more time than we used to, so it might be quicker than that.)

We'd also like to say welcome to YWS! It's always great when we get a new user, and we can't wait to get to know you better! ^^

Thank you so much Orabella!
Love to your bunnies!
Have a great day!

hello @OrabellaAvenue

could i have a cinnamon bun on my poem merciful?

i hope this isn't to much to ask :3

Thanks!
-tea

Yeah of course! It's not too much to ask at all! It may take me a few days to get to it... but I will review it nonetheless!

Thank you for requesting a review. I know my bunnies will enjoy reading it!

Have an amazing day/night!

Oops, I realized I didn't tag you.

@teatiime, thank you so much for requesting a review! My bunnies have prepared a nice little package for you and they've shipped it to your houseliterary work!

Let me know if there's any other work you'd like a review on, or if you'd like a refund on the one you got.

thank you :3

Hey Orabella!

If you're accepting, could I order a Cinnamon Bun on my poem, I am the Leaf? Thank you!

Hi there @LuminescentAnt! Yes, I am still accepting!

You can expect the review either later today or within the next few days.

Thank you for requesting a review! Have an amazing day! ^^

Hey Orabella, if you're still accepting, would you be interested in taking a look at my poem: my heart beats only for you ?

I know you said that romance might or might not be accepted, so no hard feelings whatsoever if you're not vibing with the poem! I plan to use this poem to propose to my gf in a few weeks so it is INCREDIBLY sappy (but also completely PG!) and if it doesn't make you gag then I would appreciate a cinnamon bun nitpick to help me make it better before I show my partner c:

Hi @Shady! Yes, I'm still accepting! (It's funny that you ask; I was literally thinking about this thread today XD)

I can definitely review it for you! I should probably update this thread, actually. I like romance a lot more than I used to, and I'd be thrilled to read your poem! It's so sweet you're making this for your gf; I already read it through and it's absolutly amazing! Good luck with the proposal; that is huge!

I should be able to get you a review tomorrow, but if not then, then definitely the next day!

Hey there, Orabella! I hope you are having a nice time wherever you are!

I would like to request a Fluffle of Cinnamon Buns with a little pinch of Bunny Dolls and a short Dandelion Treat on the uniqueness of the plot so far for The League of Life [Ch. IV, Nine]

P.S.: It would be nice if you check out the other chapters and review them, the bunnies may get extra tips if they do that.

P.P.S.: I can't see the bunny pics on the first post of the thread on my PC, is it my computer that's malfunctioning or is it a linking error?

Hello there, @TheRebel2007! I hope you are also having a nice time!

Thank you so much for requesting a review! Me (and my bunnies) would love to read your story! The title itself is cool - I wonder what it could mean? Well, I'll learn soon enough! ^^

P.S. : I absolutly can read the rest of the chapters! I've never read a random chapter in the middle, anyway. (It'd be exactly like picking up a book in a library, reading a random chapter, saying aloud to the librarians what I think of it, then walking off! >< )

It may take me a bit to read as 1. I don't have a ton of time with school and homework and 2. even if I have a tiny bit of time, I'd still like to set apart a fair amount to make sure it's a quality review and not a rushed one! If I can't get it to you in a few days, you know why, but hopefully I can review at least one tomorrow!

P.P.S.: Huh, that's really weird! I was in this thread a week or so ago and I think it showed up. But no! It's not just your computer! I was going to revamp the first bit anyway, so I can add a new photo then.

OrabellaAvenue wrote:*Cute Bunny Noises*

Thank you so much! :p

You don't need to hurry, take your time!

One cinnamon bun please!

Scotchtown Plantation
historic fiction
Not sure? I don’t believe it will take a half hour to finish.
Exceptions? (leave blank if none)
Link: February, 1775 – Scotchtown Plantation

Hi! I am more curious about how the reader connects, if at all, with the characters. This is a snippet of a longer story. Thank you!

Hi there @Fisher! Thanks for requesting a review! Me and my bunnies will be happy to read your story! It may take a few days to get to (especially because it's on the longer side), but we will read it as soon as we can!