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Wed Jul 07, 2021 11:41 pm
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looseleaf says...



looseleaf wants to review
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You want some reviews? Well..

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Hi! I've been wanting to get back into reviewing for a while and I figured creating a new WRFF thread would be the perfect way to do so! I'll basically review anything UNLESS:

  • the work is rated 18+ (some exceptions)
  • shows s*xual ab*se in any way, shape, or form
  • is past chapter five of a novel where I have not reviewed the previous chapters
  • anything with three or more good reviews
  • anything discriminating against a group of people in any way that does not have to do with the plot

Anyways, I'll probably get back to you within a couple hours and review it within a week or less! Here's some examples of my reviews before I head off (more will be added as I review more):



To Do

  • https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Fishr/Memento-Mori-154177
  • https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Glauke/Hypoxia-154216
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Last edited by looseleaf on Tue Jan 11, 2022 9:15 pm, edited 3 times in total.
  





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Thu Jul 08, 2021 2:12 am
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Riverlight says...



I know that you love time travel, so here's the first chapter of my new book, featuring time travel (as of chapter 2 XD)

Maltheus - One

It only has 2 reviews, so it falls in line with your criteria. Have a nice day! c:
The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.
  





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Thu Jul 08, 2021 4:33 pm
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looseleaf says...



It looks super cool, @TheScribe! I'll get onto it within the day. :)
  





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Sun Jul 11, 2021 2:26 am
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Riverlight says...



I'd love to get Chapter 2 of the same story out of the Green Room ^-^
The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.
  





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Wed Jul 14, 2021 2:57 am
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looseleaf says...



Ah, sorry, @TheScribe, I totally forgot! I'm about to go to bed, but I'll do it as soon as possible tomorrow!
  





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Wed Jul 14, 2021 3:04 am
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Riverlight says...



It's alright, and thank you! <3
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Mon Oct 11, 2021 8:20 pm
MissGangamash says...



Hi! Could you review my last chapter Fool Without A Master (Chapter 4 Part 1)?
  





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Sun Oct 17, 2021 9:57 pm
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looseleaf says...



Hey @MissGangamash! Sorry for taking so long to respond. I'm busy, but I'll try to get to it by the end of this week (remind me on Thursday if I haven't done it by then).
  





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Tue Nov 16, 2021 10:47 pm
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FireEyes says...



Hey loose! If you could review Where's Soda? that'd be cool if you have the time. :)
I won't go down by myself, but I'll go down with my friends
I'm taking back the life you stole
Came a time when every star fall brought you to tears again

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Wed Nov 17, 2021 5:30 pm
looseleaf says...



Remind me in a couple of days @FireEyes and I'll get onto it!
  





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Fri Nov 19, 2021 8:39 pm
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Fishr says...



Hi! Please review https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=153043
Title: He Buried His Wife in The Unmarked Grave
The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.
  





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Tue Feb 01, 2022 1:31 pm
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MaybeAndrew says...



Hey loosleaf, can you review this The Fallen King: Prologue
It's the prologue to the story I'm writing, but it is a bit long, so if you want you could review The Fallen King: Chapter One instead.
THANKS!
Previously Andrewknorpp, now less sure.
  





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Thu Feb 24, 2022 10:58 pm
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momonster says...



hey! if you could review my poem take me with you, i would appreciate it! thanks!
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace.
Romans 6:14 NIV

never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.

previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
  





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Thu Feb 24, 2022 11:11 pm
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looseleaf says...



will do, @dancingontheclouds! give me a day or two and i'll get on it!
  








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