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Wed Sep 30, 2020 9:27 pm
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Glauke says...



Hi, I would love to hear your quick take on my new poem Departing/Returning
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be still, sad heart, and cease repining
behind the clouds is the sun still shining
  





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Sat Oct 10, 2020 2:01 am
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starlitmind says...



Hi, alliyah! <3 I hope you don't mind me stopping by again c:

I really love this thread. I was wondering if you could leave a compliment on this?
Thanks so much! <3

there is no failure without 'i'
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Thu Jan 21, 2021 1:44 pm
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GreyMatter says...



Hi @alliyah, could you kindly visit this poem?

Lost Things
  





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Tue Dec 14, 2021 12:09 am
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fatherfig says...



haha tell me what you like i guess :> Born by the Spindle
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Thu May 26, 2022 2:42 pm
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EsmerayaRose says...



Hello Aaliyah I was wondering if you could leave a comment on
Soil of misery
I promise this type of pain only gets worse
~Esmeraya~

she/they
  








Did you ever hear the Tragedy of Darth Plagueis the wise? I thought not. It's not a story the Jedi would tell you. It's a Sith legend. Darth Plagueis was a Dark Lord of the Sith, so powerful and so wise he could use the Force to influence the midichlorians to create life... He had such a knowledge of the dark side that he could even keep the ones he cared about from dying. The dark side of the Force is a pathway to many abilities some consider to be unnatural. He became so powerful... the only thing he was afraid of was losing his power, which eventually, of course, he did. Unfortunately, he taught his apprentice everything he knew, then his apprentice killed him in his sleep. It's ironic he could save others from death, but not himself.
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