Hi stempowered thanks for reviewing my first work. Would you please review the second chapter as well? The Ripper ? Who is that ? (chapter 2) It was actually written before your review so some mistakes ar still there. :p :p
Hey steamy I have a novel I have been writing for a while i would be very thankful if you could review my first chapter for me and give me a few tips on how I can improve my writing. Thanks and have a nice day. work/dracowave/The-Seven-Heavenly-Kings-Revamped-127074
When we are children we seldom think of the future. This innocence leaves us free to enjoy ourselves as few adults can. The day we fret about the future is the day we leave our childhood behind. — Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind
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