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Sun Jan 18, 2015 8:28 pm
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rainforest says...



Ahoy everybody! Captains don't just sail boats, they review too! I will review anything you would like!

What I do review: I review poems, short stories, and articles in any genre. (I mainly review poetry though.)

What I don't review: I don't review anything that is 16+ with mature content. I don't commonly review chapters, but I may sometimes. I also don't review works that have 3 reviews or above.

Expectations: You should expect things like nitpicks, concerns, stuff like that.

Hope you can post your literary masterpieces here for me to review! Happy writing! :D
Last edited by rainforest on Thu Jul 09, 2015 10:01 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Sun Jan 18, 2015 8:34 pm
DrFeelGood says...



Hi Captain I'd like a review for my poem.

DrFeelGood's Story ...
  





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Tue Jan 20, 2015 3:47 am
Aley says...



Hey, I could use a review on this if you're up to it: I Could Fly
  





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Sun Jan 25, 2015 3:03 am
Sylar says...



Please review: Is Gender Inequality in Film Becoming Less Prevalent?
A SURPRISE PARTY

FOR ME

YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE

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Sun Jan 25, 2015 3:06 am
Glauke says...



Hey, I'd really appreciate some feedback on my short story. :)

Thomas Wakefield and the Certitude of Fate
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be still, sad heart, and cease repining
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Sun Jan 25, 2015 4:21 am
rainforest says...



I will review both of these literary works tomorrow. Sorry for the inconvenience, but I was very busy.
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Thu Apr 09, 2015 6:23 am
DrFeelGood says...



The logic behind Racism.

Do check this poem if you have some time. Thanks!
  








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