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Thu Jan 29, 2009 4:29 am
Threnody says...



Could you please review this short poem?

topic42863.html

Thanks!

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody
“One sees clearly only with the heart. Anything essential is invisible to the eyes”
~ The Little Prince~
  





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Thu Jan 29, 2009 11:52 pm
Rosendorn says...



Forever: done!

Any more?
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.
  





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Fri Jan 30, 2009 4:00 am
Angels-Symphony says...



Review Please !!!
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You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.
  





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Fri Jan 30, 2009 8:45 pm
Rosendorn says...



Angels- done!

Come on, I'm in a reviewing mood!
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.
  





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Mon Feb 09, 2009 9:21 pm
Rosendorn says...



*bump*

Come on, I know you have something that needs reviewing.
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.
  





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Sun Feb 15, 2009 7:14 pm
anti-pop says...



Slumberland
Other Fiction
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Shred it! :D
...Bitter cold, it grows
changing holds
cynicism the new norm...
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Sun Feb 15, 2009 9:36 pm
Rosendorn says...



*beep* Shred complete.

No line!
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.
  





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Tue Feb 17, 2009 3:55 am
asxz says...



Hi! Could you please review my works? I would like to know what you/anyone thinks!

This is me book called split personalities (I really need a new name!)
Prologue
Chapter 1 Part 1
Chapter 1 Part 2
Chapter 2 Part 1
Chapter 2 Part 2
Chapter 3 (only one part)
Genre: Action/Adventure Fiction

Could you please focus on the believability of the piece?
::XoX::KeepWriting::XoX::

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Writing is 3% talent and 97% not being distracted by the internet
  





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Tue Feb 17, 2009 8:09 pm
Threnody says...



Hey Rosey! You look busy... but do you have time for a short poem?


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Thanks so much!

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody
“One sees clearly only with the heart. Anything essential is invisible to the eyes”
~ The Little Prince~
  





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Tue Feb 17, 2009 9:50 pm
Rosendorn says...



Oh-kay, this might take me a bit.

I still have one spot left though.
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.
  





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Tue Feb 17, 2009 10:19 pm
Sumi H. Inkblot says...



Eh! Me! ME! :D

The Baroness, The Villainess
Genre: Sci/fi
It's only around 700 words so it shouldn't take you long. :D Thanks so much!
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Wed Feb 18, 2009 1:21 am
Rosendorn says...



Forever- Done.

Sumi- In cue (You're willing to come to somebody with coloured ink? :P *ducks*)
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.
  





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Thu Feb 19, 2009 1:04 am
Sumi H. Inkblot says...



Rosey Unicorn wrote:Forever- Done.

Sumi- In cue (You're willing to come to somebody with coloured ink? :P *ducks*)

Ink, sirrah? I see no ink. I see only a blinding mass of wriggling maroon lines. You aren't using Chimped Out, are you?

Besides. Reviews from anyone should be awesome, regardless of pixel color. ;)
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Thu Feb 19, 2009 1:08 am
Rosendorn says...



XD

To answer your question, no, I'm not using Chimped Out.

And, your review is done!

I now have two spots!
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.
  





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Sun Feb 22, 2009 12:46 am
Threnody says...



Hey Rosey! I loved the review you made for my poem, so can you please review this prologue called the Piper Legend?

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Thanks so much!

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody
“One sees clearly only with the heart. Anything essential is invisible to the eyes”
~ The Little Prince~
  








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