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Wed May 26, 2010 10:46 am
MiaParamore says...



Link: Love Has No Boundaries II

Could you review this please? Thanks in advance!

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Wed May 26, 2010 4:22 pm
Sins says...



Done shubhi!

Sorry if I wasn't much help... you got two great reviews before I had the chance to comment. :|
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Mon May 31, 2010 5:43 pm
Kaedee says...



Skins! Can you please review this short romantic piece? topic64477.html
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Tue Jun 01, 2010 1:00 pm
Sins says...



Done Kaedee :)

Next...?
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Wed Jun 02, 2010 12:10 am
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Hey Skins
Would you mind reviewing this poem of mine? It's already got two reviews, but I'd like to have some more feedback on it.
Thanks!
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Wed Jun 02, 2010 12:47 pm
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Yours is done Jagged. :D

I'm going away for four days guys, so if you want a review from me, just remember that I won't be able to get back to you straight away! You can still request, but bare in mind that it will take me a few days to get back to you.

xoxo Rhian
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Wed Jun 02, 2010 2:58 pm
sarebear says...



Hey skins,

I'm back for more! I have completed chapter 2 of For the Love of God and was wondering if you wanted to review it. I'll give you a link for the novel, and if you need to reread chapter 1 you can. Here it is: novel.php?id=154

Thanks for your help!
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Wed Jun 02, 2010 3:00 pm
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Hey! Mind reviewing the first part of my novel? Here's the link.

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Thu Jun 03, 2010 7:13 pm
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Hello!! I love the criticism and i need it!! please Review This! I'd very much appreciate it!

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Sun Jun 06, 2010 2:21 pm
Sins says...



I've just come back from holidays, guys. At the moment, my computer is kind of dodgy. Therefore, I'm going to have to do the reviews tomorrow. Sorry for the inconvenience! :xd:

EDIT: Okay, I've done the first two but now my computer has decided to, once again, not work properly. I'm getting a new one soon, thank God! I will get to the other two reviews A.S.A.P! Hopefully, they'll be done tomorrow. :wink:
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Tue Jun 08, 2010 5:11 pm
Sins says...



All done guys!

Plus, my computer is working fine now! I'm getting a new laptop soon anyway, so woop. So yeah... anyone else want a review? I'm open. 8)
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Tue Jun 08, 2010 5:17 pm
ultraviolet says...



Mind doing the next couple parts of "The Ringebearers"? They're part of the novel, so you can get to them from my link to the first part. Thanks. :)
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Wed Jun 09, 2010 6:14 pm
Sins says...



Done Violet. :)

Anyone else facny a review...? There's a smoking Mexican in it for you... :smt028
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Thu Jun 10, 2010 1:40 am
jemjive says...



Skins want to review my photos?

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