If you could read some of the chapters that I've written so far, and lemme know what you think and how I can improve it. I'd be very grateful.
The story is Vermilion tide, chapters 1-4.
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Chap 1 - topic35033.html
Chap 2 - topic35033.html
Chap 3 - topic35579.html
Chap 4 - topic37920.html
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