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My Bloody Valentine Reviews

Postby Valentine on Mon Feb 08, 2010 11:01 pm

----Your bloody Valentine is here for a review!----



What's happening peeps! This is where you give me the link to your writing, and riddle it chalk full of criticism until you never write again. Yeah, just kidding. Here's the deal, just post your link, and I'll do my best to help you guys out with some of my writing knowledge. Aight, that's about it. I would like, you know, specify what I like to review and stuff, but it doesn't really matter. This is about giving some helpful feedback.

Let's Roll
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Re: Be My Valentine Reviews

Postby KanenRenoir on Mon Feb 08, 2010 11:38 pm

I could really use a review on the fantasy novel I'm writing.
Title: The Assassin's Redemption
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Re: Be My Valentine Reviews

Postby foxfire on Tue Feb 09, 2010 1:28 am

ha! awesome( bring it on)...review my work please...i do need a good review right now

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Genre: Fantasy or horror...can't specify really
lenght: 2-3 pages
link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic58478.html
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Re: Be My Valentine Reviews

Postby dasiamari on Fri Mar 05, 2010 12:54 am

I really need reviws
title:heart of a vampire
genre:fanstay fiction
link:there is no link just fantsy fiction
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or help one fainting Robin unto his nest again,
I shall not live in vain.
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Re: Be My Valentine Reviews

Postby Valentine on Fri Mar 05, 2010 1:40 am

All done. Please, I'm bloodthirsty for reviews.
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Re: Be My Valentine Reviews

Postby Shubhi on Sat Mar 06, 2010 7:00 am

Hi can yu review my story?
Title: Finding me back
Genre: Historical Fiction
Length:Moderate
Link:Finding me back- prologue

Finding me back-Chapter 1
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Re: Be My Valentine Reviews

Postby Valentine on Sat Mar 06, 2010 4:18 pm

complete
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Re: Be My Valentine Reviews

Postby FlyingInEbony on Fri Mar 12, 2010 11:23 pm

Hi, Valentine! Would you please review this for me? Pretty please? I don't mind harshness. :) It's about a boy in Nazi Germany writing to a local newspaper about his views on the country's advances, and how some of the themes displayed in Romeo and Juliet still live to this (1939) year and its events.

Title: An Editorial Letter
Genre: Historical/Other Fiction
Length: 2.5 pages
Link: topic59730.html

Thank you in advance! :D
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Re: Be My Valentine Reviews

Postby bubblegum on Sat Mar 13, 2010 9:32 pm

Reviews are fun. xD

Title: The Robyn Academy
Genre: Fantasy
Length: 200 words or so (prologue)
Link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic60030.html
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Re: Be My Valentine Reviews

Postby Nephthys on Sun Mar 14, 2010 3:00 am

Could you please review my story?

Title: The Inspection
Genre: Science Fiction
Length: 1200 words
Link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic60055.html

Thanks :)
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Re: Be My Valentine Reviews

Postby Valentine on Thu Mar 18, 2010 11:43 pm

All done. From now on,no essays or non fiction writing people!
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Re: Be My Valentine Reviews

Postby Skins on Mon Mar 22, 2010 8:04 pm

Title: Can You See Me?
Genre: Fantasy Fiction (Don't worry, no vampires)
Length: About a page and a bit (Sorry for not being specific)
Link: topic60526.html

I hope you can do this, thanks.

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Re: Be My Valentine Reviews

Postby Valentine on Thu Mar 25, 2010 7:10 pm

complete.
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Re: Be My Valentine Reviews

Postby emmylou1995 on Sat Apr 10, 2010 9:41 pm

Title- Prologue: Diamond Fire(Revived)
Genre- Fantsy Fiction (Third Page)
Length- Not very long, maybe two pages?
Link- topic60846.html

Thank you so, so much! I am posting first chapter soon!
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Re: Be My Valentine Reviews

Postby nativecatcher on Fri May 07, 2010 9:28 pm

Title-Her dawn
Genre:Fantasy Fiction
Length: Less than a page
Link:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=62998

I know you can't post a review on that one so can you post the review on Her Dawn(Temporary)? I know it is a lot to ask but I would a thorough review thank you.
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