Young Writers Society

Hi!! lolita18 here, sneaked in for a quick review.
so i won't say, i understand your feelings because that is not possible.
Nobody can "understand" you COMPLETELY.
But it is relatable to so many levels. i think this poem expresses that phase when you have nobody to tell your opinions and then you find a solitude in writing.

this feeling is expressed so beautifully through this piece.

i loved it.

Hi yourlocalsatanist!
Rida here for a review!

I’m a sucker for short poems, because I think anyone who can express emotions in a few lines is a Poetic God, you know?
I think this poem is a very good example of that! I loved the way it expresses a story- that’s a very interesting tactic in poetry!
Moreover, it reads very much like a light, almost nursery-rhyme-ish poem, which works very well for the current theme of the poem!
It’s simple, efficient, and very cool! Keep writing, and have fun!

Yours truly,
Rida

very relateable, maxy waxy poo its good to write your feelings to cope instead of other ways, good job!