I really like this book so far. I like how Luke is funny but kinda serious at the same time. I also like how the witch is serious but then it is like "oh nevermind". I hope you keep making more chapters.
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*Chapter Two of my “The monster within” fanfic! This fanfic is a sequel to the R.L. Stine movie “Monsterville: Cabinet of Souls”. You can read the first Chapter and the Introduction under my folder titled "The monster within...". Gacha Club character designs are on my wall. Enjoy and Happy Halloween!*
NICOLE
“Rise and shine, Clementine.” An absurdly optimistic, familiar voice whispers in my ear.
I open my eyes.
Hold on, why is Luke here, sitting on my bed?! Why is he wearing clown makeup? Why is his hair orange? Why-
Wait. I remember now.
I sit up. I still feel a little tired, but my worry is starting to energize me.
“Do I still look terrible?” I ask.
Luke smiles. Why is he smiling? This is not the time to grin!
“You look like a cranky ol’ witch.”
“OLD?! I look old?!”
That’s not good. If I look old, then that means the spell is happening and Dr.Hysteria is back and he’s going to take our souls and-
Luke puts a finger over my lips. It smells like cookies. Was he eating cookies last night? I bet he was, he’s had a serious problem with sugar ever since he was four.
“Shut up. You want your parents to hear? I didn’t mean it like that. You look like how you did last night, that’s all.”
I move his hand away from my face.
“Come on, we’re going to put on makeup.” I say, motioning for Luke to get off my bed.
Luke listens, without saying anything stupid. I never know when he might open his mouth, but he’s not saying anything. Good. I don’t need him bothering me right now.
“Wait, if you’re a witch, why can’t you just change us back?”
My blood goes cold. The absolute nerve-
Wait.
That might actually work.
I really like this book so far. I like how Luke is funny but kinda serious at the same time. I also like how the witch is serious but then it is like "oh nevermind". I hope you keep making more chapters.
“OLD?! I look old?!”
That’s not good. If I look old, then that means the spell is happening and Dr.Hysteria is back and he’s going to take our souls and-
Luke puts a finger over my lips. It smells like cookies. Was he eating cookies last night? I bet he was, he’s had a serious problem with sugar ever since he was four.
“Wait, if you’re a witch, why can’t you just change us back?”
My blood goes cold. The absolute nerve-
Wait.
That might actually work.
"OLD?! I look old?!”
That’s not good. If I look old, then that means the spell is happening and Dr.Hysteria is back and he’s going to take our souls and-
Luke puts a finger over my lips.
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