Haha this was better the second time around hahah!! Nice job and keep up the good works ^^ Happy Writing and Best of Wishes. No grammar I could spot but then I'm not a good person with grammar lol. So Until next time!!! Sayonara, adios, Good bye and Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Soulkana<3
Oh jeez this made me like WOAH!!! Haha Good job!! I hope you write more and keep up the good work. Truly epic I loved it. Can't wait for more and Happy Writing! May you receive many helpful reviews. Good luck and Hope you write more. Best of wishes and until later, Adios, Sayonara!!!!
Soulkana<3
OMG!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!! And i am so glad you posted some more!!! I can't wait for me. Keep writing so I can keep reading!!! XD
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