Hi there.
I find your writing has a lot of potential Oza (if you don't mind me calling you that.)
I like the knitting of the words and how you made something quite decent out of a debate.
Personally, I find debates terrifying but extremely good ways to get you thinking.
I know my friend lives for the rush of an intense debate.
My biggest problem would be your lack of these emotions. The in-between, the stuff that happens in a debate rather then the pride of winning/disappointment of losing and the nervousness of starting.
The stuff in-between has a lot of potential ideas and words you can use to your advantage that you disregarded.
My biggest tip to you is broaden your view of the things you write. It's something that can really help you.
Kamas
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