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Young Writers Society



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by fritzalfonts


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Sat Apr 16, 2011 12:12 am
ErBear wrote a review...



Yes, hello!

I love your title. It draws me in and really makes me want to read your piece. Exquisite word choice.

But where is your story?

It says that just the pictures are in the attachment below; am I reading it wrong? Is the actual document there or just pictures to enhance the story?

Anyways, some advice. Most people won't download it in fear that it comes with an virus. I would try copying and pasting into the submission. You will most likely not get many reviews just in that format.

~Taylor (:





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