Young Writers Society

This is so sad because I know just how it feels, amazing job with the relatability. I love how it seems vague but also you threw in some phrases like "digital divide". That is some real poetry right there, poetry comes from the heart and soul, yelling out what your mouth can't seem to say. you did an amazing job on this, it feels so relatable. I feel like you did that on purpose so that other people could see something from their own life in it.

Recommendations or errors.
I didn't see any errors, in spelling or grammar. I can't have any recommendations for a piece like this.

Overall, great piece of poetry, keep up the writing!
Good luck and may writer's block flee from your presence

Good afternoon lovely soul! Hahh, this poem is too relatable- T0T

It's like my anthem for those agonizing moments waiting for a text back. You know, when you're just staring at your phone screen, hoping for some sign of life, and all you get is that mocking silence. You nail that feeling of frustration and anxiety perfectly! I mean, we've all been there, right?? That moment when you start questioning everything, wondering if they've ghosted you for good. And then the panic sets in, and you're like, "Am I losing it?" But you can't help it because you're still hanging onto that tiny glimmer of hope. The ending hits hard, though. That mix of resignation and lingering feelings—it's too real. Overall, your poem is like a punch to the gut in the best way possible.

Well done dear writer, well done - 💘