No, I really liked this too! (I guess your poem's just like Marmite)
Sometimes it's good for a poem to not have a particular story-line - or any meaning at all, really. So long as it has an image to revolve around.
And this totally accomplishes that!
The "Sharpie" thing, and everything... It's really got me making up my own storyline and characters!
I like this a lot
Be proud to be a little different - good for you!
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