I thought this poem was okay. It was written in a way easy to understand, but it lacked the structure which makes a poem great. It seemed to me the language was a bit childish in this poem. The reader can easily grasp the concept. The reader understands your point of view, but that is it. There is no emotional connection. There is nothing in this poem, to me that shows me your true essence as a writer. Keep trying though.
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