wow. thats all I can say is wow. you have it down, the whole death mood. you show me into his mind. The numbness, its just right. you got the perfect mood for this.
hmm, what I dont like...I dont really know. theres something about it thats screaming in the back of my brain, but its like in a different lauguage or something. theres something, but I dont know what.
The whole question thisng really made me want to read more, and the way you ended it. the whole "this is our story..." thing. real good.
nothing turned me off really. it was pretty good.
the questions really stood out. gave it the whole real feeling.
well now you know what I think and so I say keep writting.
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