I like this poem but there is something that I just can't grasp. I know this poem is supposed to draw you in with its mystery but I think it is missing a strong foundation, a skeleton, or maybe it is just not linked well enough. Some descriptions seem to be random, however, they impress with their beautiful imagery. This is just my impression, I could be just misunderstanding. Still, this poem leaves me curious and it feels incomplete, although very close to the point.
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