I actually really enjoyed reading this poem! It was short and to the point, it had a delightful rhyme scheme and didn't require several minutes to read nor a lot of brain power to appreciate. I love it. Keep up the good work!
I wish that I could dance with you
Beneath the starlit night;
Walk upon a silver moonbeam,
And bathe ourselves in light.
I wish the stardust in our souls
Would shine with all it’s might;
And never shall the fire in
Our hearts be doused by fright.
I wish you saw the light in you
That shines forever bright;
I wish the matches in your soul
Would strike and thus, ignite.
It is too dark, you cannot see
Past this shadowed night;
But dearest, if you only knew:
You’re a star in your own right.
I actually really enjoyed reading this poem! It was short and to the point, it had a delightful rhyme scheme and didn't require several minutes to read nor a lot of brain power to appreciate. I love it. Keep up the good work!
I loved this. It's a short, yet completely beautiful piece. I wish I could say more, but, really, that's about it. Keep writing!! 
Hi Knightly. I saw you posted and after reading this I decided to review your poem.
I wish the stardust in our souls
Will shine with all it’s might
I wish you saw the light in you
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