Young Writers Society

Wow, this is an amazing poem written by the author.

"You are glad to own a doll.
One you can customize as you please.
After all I am yours aren't I?
To do with as you please.
When was it you said that?
Yesterday?"
It explains how dominating parents can be sometimes. They want their child to be the best, they want their kids to outshine in everything their kids do but they forget that it makes the child feel like he/she is just a puppet to them.

"Mom and Dad.
Its truly a pleasure that.
You brought me to this world.
But maybe.
A mother and father.
Would have given me a life."
This line 'We brought you in this world, because of us you are here' is something that I always used to hear from my parents whenever we had an argument.

This poem is totally relatable.
Thank you for conveying every kid's feeling into words.

Keep it up.
Waiting for more.
Thank you.

Hi names 22Midnight
hope your doing well, let's get into it!

First Impression from the title i was thinking this would be about a gift that you got from your parents that you did love because it was one they where forcing you to have because it had some sort of agenda behind it.

Dreams.
Oh?
What dreams?
The ones you forced me to accept as mine?
When they were just yours.

Possibilities.
You mean my future?
You know.
The one you crushed.

Proud.
No.
You are glad to own a doll.
One you can customize as you please.
After all I am yours aren't I?
To do with as you please.
When was it you said that?
Yesterday?

Mom and Dad.
Its truly a pleasure that.
You brought me to this world.
But maybe.
A mother and father.
Would have given me a life.