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Hello, I am here to send a review/comment about your poem. Merci is a beautiful word yet you make it more beautiful writing this piece.

The first line made an impact of being catchy, making your readers more captivated to read the work. The repetitive words made melodies grow out of my mouth as I read each word, repeating them. The meaning is well-expressed. Your gratitude toward friends are written in lyrics which makes them lucky to be your friend.

Merci you stood by my side,

Merci you are with me every day and night, every day and night.

Merci, Merci.

Friends are your biggest treasure,

Don't measure them, don't measure them.

Your friends will stand with you,

Without any doubt, without any second thought about you.

Throughout your journey, your friends are your key.

Merci, Merci.

Your friends will bend for you,

Your friends will spend weekends with you.

Your friends will stay with you till the end.

Merci, Merci.

I really like using repeating words to get your point across. I also like the use of French during your work, it makes it feel a little bit more like poetic in a sense. I also like how some sentences ended shorter then others to add onto the power of the words. It's very well written!

Hi names 22Midnight
hope your doing well, let's get into it!

Merci meaning: Thank you in French.

Merci you stood by my side,

Merci you are with me every day and night, every day and night.

Merci, Merci.

Friends are your biggest treasure,

Don't measure them, don't measure them.

Your friends will stand with you,

Without any doubt, without any second thought about you.

Throughout your journey, your friends are your key.

Merci, Merci.

Your friends will bend for you,

Your friends will spend weekends with you.

Your friends will stay with you till the end.

Merci, Merci.

Hello, my fellow writing friend!
This is a beautiful piece of poetry. It is very heartfelt and I can feel the work you put into it.

Friends are your biggest treasure,

Don't measure them, don't measure them.

I am not into poetry,
but I love the rhythmic melody.
This is probably the only piece of poetry that I enjoy.
The meaning of lyrics are great too! I love the entire poem.
Thank you for writing this.