There are several things in here that I can relate to as there things that I've many a times thought and felt for, like the alienation felt from peers just for being different, not that they've been unkind much, but it's still there. And the wish to travel the world and experience, for assorted reasons. The longing for someone, the slight disappointment in the misconstrued attitudes and views that seem to exist in a lot of things and the wish for truth and peace. My favorite line was "Like snow melting in the warm sun," the cold feeling and sense of self being cleansed by something much brighter, something warm and happy, kind, something I can agree with as I have felt to. A good work, not handicapped by not using rhyming.
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