Young Writers Society

*nods vigorously at the comments above*
I feel like this is kind of...brief. Usually I'm a big fan of short, but concise but in this case it felt like you were just getting your thoughts rolling and then you stopped.
Besides that, it was a great poem with energy and rhythm. Good job.
keep thyming,
Empress

The rhyming in this is very bouncy and flowing. All I can say is awesome job, this is a cute little poem ;)

this was written really well!
I rather enjoyed reading it, it had a nice pattern and flow to it. The short two first lines, followed by the last a bit longer, i liked it.
It was really good. Can't find nothing wrong with it.

I love it! The rhythm in this is beautifully light.

Apart from what has already been said, 'noting,' in the last verse should be 'nothing.'

I would say you could encorperate a rhyming scheme with the last line of each stanza, but I quite like the whole thing the way it is.

Well done

Hello there. This was quite a well written poem, and I could find nothing wrong with it except for grammar.
Each stanza which you've written consists of four words and then a short phrase.
To punctuate them, you do this:

Rhyming, timing,
Dreaming, scheming,
The words they seem to flow

Rhyming, timing,
Dreaming, scheming;
The words they seem to flow.