Hi Ailah,
Are you talking about yourself in this poem or are you speaking to another. It doesn't matter. The poem works either way. You describe a journey which may have left scars, but you are at peace with that. Beauty always shines from within and you have found that the scars no longer matter, they were just a record of the journey. I think it is a beautiful, life affirming poem and well written.
It is positive and healing and anyone reading this poem will feel inspired to find the beauty within. I think your poem speaks to many, who are struggling in a painful way to find that peace within. Well done, keep writing your poems. PEL.
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